Prospective Student Writing

The boy was climbing the vertical mountain feeling determined. having good strong grip on the cliff he was hoping that he wouldn't die,,when the boy had reached the top of the mountain he took a deep breath and walked toward the dojo.

Little Ben Riding Hod

Little Ben riding hood.

Once upon a time there was boy named Ben, he lived in a city called Auckland. He’s 12 years old, he’s the only one in his family. He likes wearing a blue hood.

He was a stubborn little boy he would never listen to his parents they had to bribe him by giving him treats so that he would do what he was told. One day his parents told him to go and visit his grandfather in Henderson to help him to fix his car.. Ben biked 200 k's.

Ben was biking for about 2 hours but then a car came over and asked him where he was going. Ben said“  I'm going to my grandfather’s house”. The man said wanna go for a ride to your grandfather house on my car. Then suddenly Ben remembered the face of the person that came on the news three nights ago, So Ben slowly moved to his bike on the ground,so Ben got to his bike he slowly picked it up.when the man looked away to see who was making that loud noise. Ben hopped on his bike and he disappeared like a wind. The man got in his car and tried to catch up to Ben.

But Ben was too fast. Ben finally saw his grandfather’s house he hopped off his  bike and he ran to the house and shut the door fast,Ben was looking for his grandfather but suddenly he saw him fixing the car in the garage. Ben went and told his grandfather. His grandfather rang the cops. The cops came and caught the criminal and afterwards, Ben finally goes and help his grandfather fix the car and lived happily ever after.                       

Kiti in the beanstalk.

                       Kiti and the beanstalk.

One day there was a boy called kiti he has a poor family. He and his little tribe were going to a rich village called Rangitoto village , he went to explore his new village and he saw an old lady who trades magic beans. That old lady was the giants mother whom they did not know. He went and asked the old lady how much it costs. The old lady said it costs 10 gold tokens for one, he traded with the old lady. The old lady said go plant it and when it finishes growing, climb it and when you reach the top  there will be lots of gold at the top.

Kiti went home and planted it. He went to sleep but in the middle of the night he suddenly woke up because he heard lots of sounds, he then came outside to see what was happening then he saw his beans that grew he looked at it and said “thats massive’’. He then went and told the whole village.   

Kiti climbed up the the beanstalk, it took him one whole day to climb it and finally he reached the top. He saw a light, it glowed and then suddenly he heard a big giant saying “you just got fooled”. Kiti and the giant had a fight, Kiti then got knocked out onto the ground. The giant then killed Kiti by eating him for dinner. You could hear Kiti’ yelling and screaming from inside the giants stomach.